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Summer Mist's avatar

Just getting started in reading the story. I found Chapter 1 tense and exhilarating. You do an awesome job of showing vs telling.

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Magnolia McReed | Author's avatar

Thank you so much! As a writer, hearing feedback like this, truly makes my soul sing at the top of her lungs! ❤️

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